Sunday, December 1, 2013

December 2013 Poetry Challenge: A Snow Poem

Winter has arrived in the northern hemisphere. Although we haven’t had much snow yet this winter, I know it is coming. South Bend, Indiana, where we lived for seven years, has already had more than nine inches. I’m happy to be west of Lake Michigan now!

Snow has been the subject of poetry for many years. Here are some sample snow poems that are old enough to be in the public domain:


Out of the bosom of the Air.
    Out of the cloud-folds of her garments shaken,
Over the woodlands brown and bare,
    Over the harvest-fields forsaken,
            Silent and soft and slow
            Descends the snow.

Even as our cloudy fancies take
    Suddenly shape in some divine expression,
Even as the troubled heart doth make
    In the white countenance confession,
            The troubled sky reveals
            The grief it feels

This is the poem of the air,
    Slowly in silent syllables recorded;
This is the secret of despair,
    Long in its cloudy bosom hoarded,
            Now whispered and revealed
            To wood and field.

~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


It sifts from Leaden Sieves —
It powders all the Wood.
It fills with Alabaster Wool
The Wrinkles of the Road —

It makes an Even Face
Of Mountain, and of Plain —
Unbroken Forehead from the East
Unto the East again —

It reaches to the Fence —
It wraps it Rail by Rail
Till it is lost in Fleeces —
It deals Celestial Vail

To Stump, and Stack — and Stem —
A Summer’s empty Room —
Acres of Joints, where Harvests were,
Recordless, but for them —

It Ruffles Wrists of Posts
As Ankles of a Queen —
Then stills its Artisans — like Ghosts —
Denying they have been —

~ Emily Dickinson

Here is a snow poem I wrote a few years ago.

 Sculpting in Snow

This is what
we’ve been waiting for
all winter -
six inches
of good packing snow,
cold and moist
in our gloves,
our ball growing
larger and larger
to serve as base
for a sparkling sculpture.

We might construct
a dog on its haunches
begging for food,
a penguin with a fish
in its mouth,
or Lincoln in a tall hat.
Or maybe

you and me
in buttoned coats

holding hands.

~ Wilda Morris

First published in Christian Science Monitor, February 2, 2005.

Toward the end of this post you will find a list of other snow poems. Some are haiku; some are rather long. Some are poems about snow, but in others snow is primarily the setting. Animals (such as Jane Hirshfields’s badger) do things in or under the snow; Edna St. Vincent Millay’s buck has something done to it. Someone may be out in the snow (“stopping by the woods” with Robert Frost), looking out the window or, like Marjorie Saiser’s aunts, entertaining themselves inside on a snowy evening. Some are poems of memory or nostalgia. Others are more hard-edged. The snowfall, snowflakes or snow storm are sometimes literal, sometimes metaphoric, and sometimes both.

The December Challenge: a Snow Poem

Write a poem of any length from three to 20 lines. The poem may be about snow, or it may be a poem about something else, so long as snow appears in a significant role in the poem.

Submit only one poem. Your poem can be free or formal verse. If you submit a form poem, please specify the form. The deadline is December 15. Poems submitted after the December 15 deadline will not be considered. There is no charge to enter, so there are no monetary rewards, but winners are published on this blog.

Copyright on each poem is retained by the poet.

Poems published in books or on the Internet (including Facebook and other on-line social networks) are not eligible. If you poem has been published in a periodical, you may submit it if you retain copyright, but please include publication data.

How to Submit Your Poem:

Send your poem to wildamorris[at]ameritech[dot]net (substitute the @ sign for “at” and a . for “dot”. Be sure to provide your e-mail address. Include a brief bio which can be printed with your poem, if you are a winner this month.

Submission of a poem gives permission for the poem to be posted on the blog if it is a winner, so be sure that you put your name, exactly as you would like it to appear if you do win, at the end of the poem. Poems may be pasted into an email or sent as an attachment. Please do not indent the poem or center it on the page. It helps if you submit the poem in the format used on the blog (Title and poem left-justified; title in bold, and not all in capital letters; your name at the bottom of the poem). Also, please do not use spaces instead of commas in the middle of lines. I have no problem with poets using those techniques; I sometimes use them myself. However I have difficulty getting the blog to accept and maintain those features. Please include a short bio with your submission.

I look forward to reading your poem!

More Snow Poems:

*Robert Frost, “Stopping by the Woods on a Snowy Evening,” The Poetry of Robert Frost: The Complete Poems, Complete and Unabridged (Henry Holt, 1968). Online at
*Robert Frost, “Dust of Snow,” The Poetry of Robert Frost: The Complete Poems, Complete and Unabridged (Henry Holt, 1968). Online at
*Robert Frost, “A Patch of Old Snow,” The Poetry of Robert Frost: The Complete Poems, Complete and Unabridged (Henry Holt, 1968). Online at
*Edna St. Vincent Millay, “The Buck in the Snow,” Collected Poems (Harper Perennial Modern Classics, 2011). Online at
*Richard Wilbur, "Boy at the Window" from Collected Poems (Harcourt, 2004). Online at
*Jane Hirshfield, “Beneath the Snow, the Badger’s Steady Breathing,” After (HarperCollins, 2006), p. 11.
*Mary Oliver, “White-Eyes,” Poetry (2002). Online at
*Robert Bridges, “London Snow,” Online at
*Kenneth Patchen, “The Snow is Deep on the Ground,” Selected Poems (New Directions
Publishing Corporation, 1957),
*Farouk Masud, “Snow,” Online at
*Percy Bysshe Shelley, “Lines: The cold earth slept below,”
*Robert Hill Whiteman, “Horses in the Snow,” Star Quilt (Holy Cow! Press, 1984),
*Wallace Stevens, “The Snow Man,” Online at
* Marjorie Saiser, “My Old Aunts Play Canasta in a Snowstorm,” Lost in Seward County (The Backwater Press, 2001). Online at
*James L. Corcoran, “Snowflakes,” Online at
*Margaret Atwood, “Shapechangers in Winter,” Morning in the Burned House: New Poems (Houghton Mifflin, 1995), p. 120. Online at
*Alan Harris, “Listening to Christmas,” Online at
*Kajiwara Hashin, another haiku. Online at
*Collection of snow haiku at

© 2013 Wilda Morris