The
challenge this month was to write a poem about what you would try to save if
you had to flee your home. The poems reflected different angles from wanting to
save irreplaceable photos (or taking recollections in lieu of photos) and members of an extended family gathering together and
packing up a vehicle to flee (on an over-crowded highway), to more
philosophical and theological approaches: saving what heals, in one poem;
saving up treasures in heaven, in another.
The
judge, Karen Paul Holmes, selected this poem by Elaine Sorrentino:
Unwelcome Estate Sale
My lids are drawn, my brain in REM.
In unsettling slumber I dream of bargain hunters
scavenging my home, as if in ruins before ruined,
In unsettling slumber I dream of bargain hunters
scavenging my home, as if in ruins before ruined,
fingering my grandmother’s bone china
tea cups,
scrutinizing the yellow corn-shaped Belleek vase--
a gift from my departed mother-in-law--
scrutinizing the yellow corn-shaped Belleek vase--
a gift from my departed mother-in-law--
questioning whether the vintage
turntable, receiver
and oversized speakers still perform in tandem.
What are you asking for these treasures?
and oversized speakers still perform in tandem.
What are you asking for these treasures?
Stunned, I am unable to reply,
then insist the interlopers leave our beachfront
home, still intact, yet on forecasters’ death row list,
then insist the interlopers leave our beachfront
home, still intact, yet on forecasters’ death row list,
a second, deadlier No Name assault on
its way,
predicted to devastate this time, not merely
deposit salty, gritty sediment, broken bits
predicted to devastate this time, not merely
deposit salty, gritty sediment, broken bits
of crab shells, untethered bait lines
in our basement
as it did years ago. This one could yank
as it did years ago. This one could yank
our Scituate home off its pseudo-solid
foundation.
You cannot save everything, there’s
too little time,
they announce, rubbing their hands together,
moving on to rummage through other rooms.
they announce, rubbing their hands together,
moving on to rummage through other rooms.
My heart instructs me to set
boundaries.
Teddy Ruxpin and Puppy McPupster clutched
Teddy Ruxpin and Puppy McPupster clutched
to my chest, I acquiesce: Ten
dollars for the stereo.
Do not touch my children’s things.
~ Elaine Sorrentino
Elaine
Sorrentino owns copyright on this poem.
The judge said, “I love all the detail
and the horrible dream of people taking your things.” I agree. I also like how
the mothering instinct takes over and the speaker says an internal, “Oh, well,”
about losing her own belongings, but isn’t so ready to give up what belongs to
her children.
The poem
reminded me of what happened to Japanese families on the West Coast during
World War II. When they were rounded up and taken to internment camps, they had
little time to decide what to do with their property, and were not allowed to
take much with them.
While the
circumstances under which individuals and families have to flee natural or
human-created disasters vary, the pain is always there. And often someone else
takes advantage of the ones who have to flee.
Bios:
Elaine Sorrentino is the Communications Director at
South Shore Conservatory in Hingham, MA, where she creates promotional and
first-person content for press and for a blog called SSC Musings. Her poetry has been published in Minerva Rising, won honorable mention
in the June 2018 Wilda Morris poetry challenge, and her non-fiction piece,
titled “It’s All About Attitude,” took grand prize in the Write a DearReader
Contest at reader advisory blog, DearReader.com.
Karen Paul
Holmes
has two full-length poetry collections, No Such Thing as Distance
(Terrapin Books, 2018) and Untying the Knot (Aldrich Press, 2014). She
was chosen as a Best Emerging Poet in 2016 by Stay Thirsty Media. Publications
include Prairie Schooner, Valparaiso Review, Tar River Poetry, Poet Lore, and
other journals and anthologies. Holmes hosts The Side Door Poets in
Atlanta and Writers’ Night Out in the Blue Ridge Mountains.
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Wilda Morris