October 2019 Winners - Portrait Poems

A Magnified Life

The challenge for October was to draw a portrait of someone with words instead of paints or camera. There were a number of interesting submissions. I sent the four I thought were best to Matthew Lawler, whose poem was used in the challenge this month, and he selected the following poem as the winner:

A Magnified Life

He experienced life through lenses,
first, a pair of black-rimmed kid specs,
then, a duck hunter’s telescopic sight at twenty,
swapped out for high powered binoculars at thirty,
to watch birds he appeared to love
more than humans.

That’s what ten-year-old me
thought of my uncle, the “bachelor”
a word whispered behind cupped hands
as if bachelor equaled “undesirable,”
but in his case simply meant
he hadn’t met my aunt yet.

He arrived every Monday at six for dinner,
with a fresh, squishy loaf of Challah,
a warm, welcome offering from the bakery
on his way to the subway station;
it wouldn’t be until we moved to the ‘burbs
that he required a car to make it to dinner on time.

He spoke in a quiet, yet forceful tone
always quick to share his views on issues
from the best flower arranging method,
to whether Communism is more desirable
then Democracy, because it lands us all
on the same economic playing field.

Marriage at fifty-two softened his hard edges,
mellowing out his need for constant debate,
choosing a thoughtful partner with multiple views
and interests, including his beloved bird watching;
her lens, attached to the front of her camera,
serving to chronicle their exploration.

Falling prey to Parkinson’s disease, my bird expert
uncle suffered his fatal decline at eighty-three,
tumbling from his wheelchair while birding,
a rather fitting end for one who led weekend
birding trips for old and new ornithologists,
a founding member of Bird Observer magazine.

The day of his funeral
Black Lives Matter demonstrators tied themselves
to barrels in protest, blocking the highway,
preventing some from saying their goodbyes.
On the way home, we couldn’t help but wonder−
through what lens would he have viewed such rebellion.

~ Elaine Sorrentino

The poem Lawler selected as second place is quite different. It deals with a character from history (you can look him up on Wikipedia!), and the poem is rhymed.

Alexander Pearce

Alexander Pearce, you won’t know the name

And you’ll gag when you find out his claim to fame

He was sent to Australia for steeling some shoes

According to Ireland’s 1819 crime news

Ended up in Port Author but got out on bail

Drunk and disorderly so it’s back into jail

Recalcitrant convicts were sent then to an isle

Just west of Tasmania in lieu of a trial

Escape from Tasmanian prison he did

Eight escapees in the wilderness hid

They fought to survive with no water or food

Leaving eight ruthless guys in a murderess mood

So they made a pact, these desperate guys

To use as a meal, the next guy that dies

And wouldn’t you know it, when it got down to two

Alexander Pearce knew just what he had to do

In a battle of wits and an axe in his hand

Alexander Pearce was the last standing man

He ate what he could and appeared healthy, well fed

When he was captured and to Port Author led

Although he confessed and told them the truth

He went right back to prison, they needed some proof

Ninety days later, he escaped once again

With a guy named Cox who he found couldn’t swim

So there by the river Cox met his fate

And Alex, poor guy, had some more on his plate

So when he was caught (this is where you might gag)

They found human flesh in his shoulder pack bag

He said hang me now for I can’t resist                         

The taste of man’s flesh from ankle to wrist

So they granted his wish and they hung the young lad

The story is true, the story is sad

He was young, he was poor, and he paid his dues

All of this from a poor kid needing shoes

~ Mike Dailey

Congratulations to Elaine Sorrentino and Mike Dailey for their winning poems. Please remember that the poets own copyright on their poems.

Congratulations to Mary Jo Balistreri (“Presenting the Carroll Sisters”) and Joe Cottonwood (“Don’t Mess with Martha”) whose poems won Honorable Mentions this month.

Honorable mentions go to Mary Jo Balistreri for “Presenting the Carroll Sisters” and to Joe Cottonwood for “Don’t Mess with Martha.”

Bios:

Mike Dailey is a well known poet in southeast North Carolina.  He lives near Sunset Beach with his wife of 47 years and the occasional visits with his daughter and two grandkids.  He has had three books of poetry published; one based on cancer treatments he underwent, one based on his 30 years working as a civilian analyst for the US Army, and a book of spiritual poems.  He is currently putting together a collection of children’s’ poems and looking for a publisher. Mike Dailey’s poetry can be serious, topical, or very moving but he is known more for his rhythm and rhyme poetry with a twist of humor.  He recently took over the leadership of a poetry group in Brunswick County promoting a revisit to poetry for those that left poetry behind back in their school days.

Matthew J. Lawler, a Chicago native, began writing raps in the 8^th grade. He has published in numerous journals including The Muscreabt, Caravel Literary Arts Journal, Unlost, Peeking Cat Magazine, and Eunoi Review, and in an anthology titled The Best Emerging Poets of Illinois from Z Publishing. His first full-length poetry collection, Concrete Oracles was published by Alien Buddha Press in 2018.

Elaine Sorrentino is Director at South Shore Conservatory in Hingham, MA, where she creates promotional and first-person content for press and for a blog called SSC Musings.  Facilitator of the Duxbury Poetry Circle, she has been published in Minerva Rising, Willawaw Journal, Glass: A Journal of Poetry, The Writers’ Magazine, The Writers Newsletter, Haiku Universe, and Failed Haiku. She has been a winner of Wilda Morris’s Poetry Challenge before.

© Wilda Morris

October 2019 Challenge - Portrait Poems

J. Norman Webber in 1955, with his niece, Sue Addis

Poet and critic Ed Hirsch described Ted Kooser’s Book, Delights and Shadows, as “a book of portraits and landscapes.” Some of the poems may be more like literary snapshots than portraits, but they allow you to see a person almost as if you were holding a their picture in your hand. If you don’t own the book, I recommend  that you purchase a copy, or borrow one through your public library. Or, you can look up the book on amazon.com, click on “See inside,” and read a number of the poems.

Catherine Lamb wrote another kind of portrait poem: “How to Be My Father.” I discovered it in Writing as a Road to Self Recovery, by Barry Lane (Cincinnati OH: Writer’s Digest Books, 1993). I have been working on a collection of poems, The Unapproved Uncle, so I borrowed Lamb’s approach to write a poem about Uncle Norman:

How to Be Uncle Norman 

        after Catherine Lamb

Be first-born in a large family of limited means.

Outwardly accept your father’s dictum

that it’s your responsibility to stay home

and help support your eight younger siblings.

Quit going to church.

Work when you feel like it.

Fish when you feel like it.

Loll around doing nothing when you feel like it.

Sit in the crook of a tree and read.

Smoke. Roll your own cigarettes.

Roll your eyes when your father

tells you to do something.

Be sure your eyes twinkle

whenever a child is near.

Wink your eye at the cute young woman

from Minnesota you meet at City Park.

Do not apply for a regular job.

Don’t even own a tie.

Marry that cute young woman

you met at the park.

Try to have children.

Keep a box of old wooden spools

under your bed

for children to play with.

Teach your nieces

how to cast a fishing rod

off the front porch.

Teach them to roll cigarettes.

Take nephews to a dark field

to watch the Northern Lights.

Learn the hard way to be sure

no wasp made its nest

where you throw the blanket to sit on.

Laugh at the children’s repeated riddles.

Cheer them as they walk the rolling oil barrel

across the lawn or jump rope

as it turns beneath their feet.

Tell tall tales. Accept the scoffing responses

of your siblings who know better.

End your life with emphysema,

and the adoration of nieces and nephews.

~ Wilda Morris

A slightly different version of this poem was published in Rockford Review.

Last Sunday, Matthew J. Lawler was one of the featured poets at Brewed Awakening in Westmont, Illinois. At least two of the poems he read were  portraits: “The Vet,” and “The Window Washer.”

The Window Washer

There’s a man who washes windows

along Western Avenue.

Seemingly irrational, he blurts stories

about giant pythons circling his steps,

latching on his flesh, choking every breath

as blood spurts from his nostrils.

His awkward stance resembles

an avalanche of some sorts,

disheveled by the devils he snorts.

Entangled in the cob webs of cobblestone.

One of three million who call Chicago home.

He works for a living, but only to feed

his habit of alcohol and coke,

he sleeps under the viaducts

with the other addicts,

those with skeleton skin,

the lepers who’ve lost hope.

There’s a man who washes windows

along Western Avenue,

from sun up to sun down,

with squeegee fresh pressed against glass,

he sees a haunting image loudly

conjuring shadows from his past.

He’s been a prisoner for years

held captive by that helpless hunger

that pelts urges with no restraint,

wishing for excursions perhaps

to a transcendent state.

What keeps him going?

he finds meaning in the washing.

It’s a cycle of blissful anguish.

Clean the outdoor storefront windows

while the insides he can’t touch,

wipe the stains from the outside window panes

while the insides remain full of gunk.

He’s a surface cleanser with squeegee in hand,

divested of self-esteem, to himself he’s hardly a man.

He washes for the fix, transient as it may be,

he sees the world as he sees himself

in a flask drunk and crazy.

Walking up and down the street for pennies

at least he’s working for a living,

blood dripping down his nose from

all the snow he’s been sniffing.

Strolling along the sidewalk

talking to the summer heat,

he notices stress cracks carved in windows,

he stops to gaze inside and look, 

but turns from his reflection,

realizing his days are pages in a book.

Years vanishing like his once youthful face,

shards of glass cracking on his feet

from a car’s broken rear view mirror

parked alongside the street.

Bars line up like pillars across

the windows of a church,

he sees the bars in his own eyes

and can’t seem to escape,

been afraid for so long

to try and change his fate.

He hesitates to look deep inside

fearing what could be,

that he’s a prison to himself

and can’t seem to get free.

There’s a man who washes windows

along Western Avenue,

With mechanical hands in

a methodical motion

moving up and down like a seismograph.

His life is an earthquake,

rumbling, shattering the

Windows.

~ Matthew J. Lawler

From Concrete Oracles (Alien Buddha Press, 2018). This book is available on amazon.com See https://www.amazon.com/Concrete-Oracles-Matthew-J-Lawler/dp/1790582725/ref=mp_s_a_1_1?keywords=concrete+oracles&qid=1569954870&sprefix=concrete+oracles&sr=8-1.

I don't often repeat challenges, but there are so many ways to respond to this one that I'm doing it a second time. You can read the winning poems from the first "portrait poem" challenge at http://wildamorris.blogspot.com/2016/08/august-poetry-challenge-portrait-poems_27.html. Click on "Older Post" to read the example poems from that month.

 The October Challenge:

Write a portrait poem – or, if you prefer – a snapshot in the style of Ted Koozer’s snapshot poems. In either case, it should be a picture of a particular person.

Your poem may be free verse or formal. If you use a form, please identify the form when you submit your poem.

Title your poem unless it is a form that does not use titles (don’t follow Emily Dickenson’s practice on that!). Single-space. Note that the blog format does not accommodate long lines; if they are used, they have to be broken in two, with the second part indented (as in the poem “Lilith,” one of the November 2018 winners), or the post has to use small print.

You may submit a published poem if you retain copyright, but please include publication data. This applies to poems published in books, journals, newspapers, or on the Internet. However, poems already used on this blog are not eligible to win this month, but the poets may submit a different poem.

The deadline is October 15. Poems submitted after the deadline will not be considered. There is no charge to enter, so there are no monetary rewards; however, winners are published on this blog. Please don’t stray too far from “family-friendly” language (some children and teens read this blog). No simultaneous submissions, please. You should know by the end of the month whether or not your poem will be published. Decision of the judge or judges is final.

The poet retains copyright on each poem. If a previously unpublished poem wins and is published elsewhere later, please give credit to this blog. I do not register copyright with the US copyright office, but by US law, the copyright belongs to the writer unless the writer assigns it to someone else.

If the same poet wins three months in a row (which has not happened thus far), he or she will be asked not to submit the following two months.

How to Submit Your Poem:

Send one poem only to wildamorris[at]ameritech[dot]net (substitute the @ sign for “at” and a . for “dot”). Put “October Poetry Challenge Submission” in the subject line of your email. Include a brief bio that can be printed with your poem if you are a winner this month. Please put your name and bio UNDER the poem in your email. If the poem has been published before, please put that information UNDER the poem also. NOTE: If you sent your poem to my other email address, or do not use the correct subject line, the poem may get lost and not be considered for publication. Do not submit poems as PdF files.

Submission of a poem gives permission for the poem to be posted on the blog if it is a winner, so be sure that you put your name (exactly as you would like it to appear if you do win) at the end of the poem.

Poems may be pasted into an email or sent as an attachment (Doc, Docx, rich text or plain text; no pdf files, please). Please do not indent the poem or center it on the page. It helps if you submit the poem in the format used on the blog (Title and poem left-justified; title in bold (not all in capital letters); your name at the bottom of the poem). Also, please do not use multiple spaces instead of commas in the middle of lines. I have no problem with poets using that technique (I sometimes do it myself). However I have difficulty getting the blog to accept and maintain extra spaces.

Poems shorter than 40 lines are generally preferred but longer poems will be considered.

© Wilda Morris