The
November Poetry Challenge elicited a number of interesting poems. Congratulations
to all who entered for their creativity. And a special congratulations to the
four winners.
The
judge for the November Poetry Challenge was Maureen Tolman Flannery. She gave
an honorable mention to Sheila Elliot for her prose poem.
Change
For a
change, I thought I'd go east down that old road with a saint's name, so
white-knuckled, I watched beams of light ice the top flanks of a dozen
octagonal signs. Night approaching. Wipers snapping like mean little whips
against the windshield's elusive steaming. For this change, I paid a price,
watched the fading light descend into the blackest grey.
Change
is not cheap. It rattles in pockets like
something about to break. It somersaults its way into the beggar's cup or
echoes with the sound of a flat note as it lands in the open shell of the
street musician's open guitar case.
"Keep the change," I tell the waiter, so noblesse oblige. I keep those old school coins cold as the
sacramental medals that once dangled beneath my ironed uniform blouse, though
change does not always warm the heart.
Change can still bring you back to start, to home where slippers replace
shoes and spare change is tossed into an old can and takes its place discreetly
in that illusionary wealth.
~ Sheila
Elliott
Third
place goes to a poem the judge says is thoughtful and captures a memorable
moment. It is by
Mary Cohutt.
Mary Cohutt.
Falling
Grandma, I’m so in love with this
toy….
You can’t fall in love with
things…… I said
with my grown up tone
And then
I saw
His
lashes fall to cheek
His chin
fall to chest
His toy
fall from hand
I felt my 60 year guard fall……. and remembered
myself
…and
thought of …
A
falling star wish and hopes for tomorrow
The long
fall from Grace and sweetness of redemption
Cool
water as it falls over moss covered rocks
The
liquid gold fall of late day light
The
happy foot crunch of yellowed fall leaves
Falling
asleep on a sun scented pillow
…and I
could feel my heart fall in love with this life….
I fell
to my knees and lifted his chin
Cajoled
his fallen lashes ‘till blue met blue
And I
let three simple words fall from my lips
I was wrong
~ Mary
Cohutt
The
judge said the second place poem by Eileen
Kimbrough was very clever. She liked the “on-target word
play,”
Just Write Right
Will you
have the right to write a will,
and the
will to be right
when you
write your will?
Will you
do the right thing
within
your rights?
Will you
write about
your
right to write your will?
This
rite of passage falls right when
all
that’s left is to write a will.
Just
step to the right of must
and
trust your guts,
no windy
gust of musts.
I trust
you’ll write
your
will and your trust,
not too
far to the left.
It’s
right that it’s your right.
Just be
sure it’s just.
And make
it just right.
Write
just. Write right. Just write.
~ Eileen
Kimbrough
The judge said that Lindsey
Bellosa's poem, “Solace” the first place poem,
“is a very moving poem, not at all bogged down by the desire to re-use or
overuse a word.” I think you will agree.
Solace
Snowflakes,
small and sharp as tears, float into the lake
as each
small pain sharpens into future—
the sky
has been pregnant with snow for days.
I have
bled for five days, less pregnant each one.
The
leaves shed on the ground, so vibrant,
as I
shed color too: exposed; becoming barren
as each
stark tree. Winter bares down with gray.
The sun
gleams dimly on the lake, and the earth
and God
turn dimly away from the situation.
Your
soul, whatever it was, melts
and
becomes only me. The snowflakes melt
into the
lake; leaves disappear under blank snow.
There
will be another like you; there will be new leaves
in
spring. But you vanish, as this season vanishes—
all like
a dream, as summer seems a dream
in the
dead of winter.
The
snowflakes still catch the light
and I
catch each sharp breath
glittering.
Life goes on, coldly,
and
there is solace in that.
~ Lindsey
Bellosa
All of these
poems remain the property of the poets who wrote them.
Bios:
Lindsey Bellosa lives in Syracuse, NY. She
has an MA in Writing from the National University of Ireland, Galway and has
poems published in both Irish and American journals: most recently The Comstock Review, The Galway Review, IthacaLit, Crannog, and The MOON Magazine. Her first
chapbook, The Hunger, was published
with Willet Press in 2014.
Mary
Cohutt is a Leasing Consultant in Western Massachusetts. She also
has a small business called "The Good Daughter" in which she takes
care of household paperwork/business for the elderly. She has two children and
two grandchildren. In addition to writing, she enjoys gardening and reading.
Sheila Elliott's
poetry can be found in the Illinois Women's Press Association's 2014
anthology of prose and poetry. She is a regular contributor at
Oak Park (IL) Writer's Group events, including their annual public reading
in November. Her poetry and prose can be found in their
anthology, Keystrokes.
Eileen Kimbrough is
a graduate of the School of the Art Institute of Chicago. She has produced
visual arts in many media and exhibited in art galleries, museums, colleges,
and gift shops throughout Illinois. She has been employed as a graphic
designer, editorial and fashion illustrator, receptionist, bookkeeper and
salesperson. Eileen has sold many copies
of her self-published poetry book, Painting
with Words, and contributed the poems and art for Wings for the Soul, published by a non-profit. Her stories and
poems were published in Rivulets. She
lives in Aurora with her husband, Bob Walker, innumerable books and artistic
clutter.
A bio
for Maureen Tolman Flannery can be found in the previous post.
Check
back early in December for the next Poetry Challenge.
© Wilda
Morris