Perhaps among
North Americans the best known “What if” poem is “Whatif” by Shel Silverstein.
You can read it at http://www.famouspoetsandpoems.com/poets/shel_silverstein/poems/14819.
It was written for school-age children and reflects many of their fears. A
child who has friends whose parents’ marriage has fallen apart, may worry about
whether his or her own parents will get divorced. What, the student may wonder,
if I’m late for school, or fail the math quiz? Silverstein did a good job of
summing up the concerns of these young people in his poem. Perhaps the most
poignant – and prevalent – “what if” among Silverstein’s readers is “What if
nobody likes me?”
Samuel Taylor
Coleridge’s “what if” poem may or may not have inspired Silverstein. Coleridge’s
“What if You Slept” has an entirely different atmosphere: He did not gather
concerns or fears into his poem. Rather he used his imagination to devise a
magical situation.
What if You Slept?
What if you
slept
And what if
In your sleep
You dreamed
And what if
In your dream
You went to heaven
And there plucked a strange and beautiful flower
And what if
When you awoke
You had that flower in your hand
Ah, what then?
And what if
In your sleep
You dreamed
And what if
In your dream
You went to heaven
And there plucked a strange and beautiful flower
And what if
When you awoke
You had that flower in your hand
Ah, what then?
~ Samuel
Taylor Coleridge
This poem is I
the public domain.
Another good “what
if” poem is “What If (This Week),” by Grace Paley, in her book, Begin Again: Collected Poems, p. 161.
The November Challenge:
As you have
doubtless figured out by not, the November Challenge is to write a “What if”
poem. Your poem can be as imaginative as Coleridge’s, or you can use Shel
Silverstein’s poem as your prompt.
Title your
poem unless it is haiku or another form that does not use titles. It may be
free or formal verse. If you use a form, please identify the form when you
submit your poem. Please single-space, and don’t use lines that are overly long
(because the blog format doesn’t accommodate long lines).
You may
submit a published poem if you retain
copyright, but please include publication data. This applies to poems
published in books, journals, newspapers, or on the Internet.
The
deadline is November 15.
Poems submitted after the deadline will not be considered. There is no charge
to enter, so there are no monetary rewards; however winners are published on
this blog. Please don’t stray too far from “family-friendly” language. No
simultaneous submissions, please. You should know by the end of the month
whether or not your poem will be published on this blog. Decision of the judge
or judges is final.
Copyright on
each poem is retained by the poet. If a winning poem is published elsewhere
later, please give credit to this blog.
How to
Submit Your Poem:
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files, please). Please do not indent the
poem or center it on the page. It helps if you submit the poem in the format
used on the blog (Title and poem left-justified; title in bold (not all in
capital letters); your name at the bottom of the poem). Also, please do not use
spaces instead of commas in the middle of lines. I have no problem with poets
using that technique (I sometimes do it myself). However I have difficulty
getting the blog to accept and maintain extra spaces.
Poems shorter
than 40 lines are generally preferred but longer poems will be considered.
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Morris