Monday, April 23, 2012

April Challenge Winners

Congratulations to the three winners of the April Challenge, selected by poet William Marr.

The first stanza of Eve Lomoro's first place poem seems rather abstract, but she takes us by surprise in the second stanza.

To Argue or Not to Argue

most arguments are
people don’t listen
they just wait
thinking of words
they will use to
pounce on you
at the first possible moment
pounce on you
at every opportunity
thus it’s best
to never stop talking
you’ll drive them crazy
in the end

cats are different
they can
pounce on you
anytime they wish
and you never say a word
because it would be

~ Eve Lomoro

Thai Chau expresses a truth that many people don't believe during their teen years. They may not quite believe it until they become parents.

To Argue with Mother

To argue with Mother is
You say “Yes”
She’d say “No”
To win or lose
Is not much difference
‘Cause the argument is always started up
From love
And ends up
Still Being

~ Thai Chau

Anna Yin took the challenge in a different direction, arguing with a famous artist.

Talking to Frida Kahlo

I am not you.
You stand, you sit,
and you untie yourself
on a canvas of pain and truth.
I escape.

Behind surrealistic scenes,
you strike reality;
I flutter fantasy.

“No!” eyebrows straighten,
your silent self rises.

I manage to forge
a smile,
in every flash of blue.

I call that “hope”,
knowing you name it

~ Anna Yin

Each of these poets maintains copyright on their own poem.

If you didn't try the April challenge earlier, this may give you inspiration to write your own argument poem or poems.

Watch for the Next Challenge, which will be posted on May 1.

© 2012 Wilda Morris

Sunday, April 1, 2012

Poetry Challenge for April 2012

Photo of the Pacific Ocean taken by Wilda Morris, in September, 2004.

It seems to be in the nature of human beings to argue. Children may argue with friends over who got the biggest cookie or who gets to play with which toy. In some cultures teenagers argue with parents about how late they can stay out, and where and with whom. Co-workers may argue over work assignments. Friendships,love affairs, and marriages are sometimes broken up by arguments. One of the best pieces of advice I was ever give is that it is fine to disagree, but try to disagree agreeably.

Though you may have argued with other people, have you ever argued with the ocean? Or with sparrows? William Marr is writing a whole series of poems about pointless arguments—not arguments with human beings, but with other elements of nature and with inanimate objects. These poems have powerful images as well as a rye humor. Marr agreed to let me print two of his argument poems for the April challenge.

In case you are not familiar with Marr, I’d like to introduce you to this creative and original poet and artist. Marr was born in Taiwan and has published a total of seventeen books of poetry in Chinese, two books of essays and several books of translations in Taiwan, Hong Kong, and China. His two books of poetry in English, Autumn Window (1st ed. 1995, 2nd ed. 1996, Arbor Hill Press, Chicago) and Between Heaven and Earth (2010, PublishAmerica, Baltimore) are distributed at His poems are included in over one hundred anthologies, ranging from literary textbooks to special collections, and have been translated into more than ten languages.

Most of Marr's poems are short(many of them considerably shorter than those below). Many are humorous, and some have such surprising endings they almost take your breath away. Marr is a past president of the Illinois State Poetry Society, and a member of the Poets Club of Chicago and the Kentucky State Poetry Society. He has edited and published several anthologies of Chinese and Taiwanese modern poetry, and also pursues other artistic interests including painting and sculpting. He has held several solo as well as group exhibits in the Chicago area, Beijing, and on the Internet. His Website at contains images of his art work as well as selections from his poetry books. A scientist by profession, he has lived and worked in the Chicago area since 1970.

As they say on television and radio, in the interests of fair disclosure, William Marr is also a friend. I have the privilege of being in two poetry groups with him, groups in which we critique each other's poems.

Here are two of Marr’s “argument poems”:


to argue with the ocean is pointless
you have neither the unlimited supply of saliva
nor the enormous lung capacity

the best thing you can do
is to lie down and become a beach
entice him to rush passionately toward you
over and over again
desperately trying to kiss you
embrace you
possess you

while you just lie there with a mischievous smile
toying with him
wasting him
exhausting him
watching him let out a long sigh
and retreat

convinced and speechless

~ William Marr

NOTE: In the poem above, some lines should be indented, but blogspot does not allow indentations. Marr gave me permission to print the poem with all lines left justified.


to argue with sparrows in the sun
is of course pointless
they chitter and chatter
flutter and twitter
getting more excited and louder every second
there's simply no chance for you to open your mouth

only after the sun too becomes bored and impatient
and darkens its face
do they stop

at this moment
all you have to do is
lightly stamp your feet on the ground
they'll all be gone
without leaving
the slightest trace

~ William Marr

William Marr retains copyright to these poems.

April Poetry Challenge

The challenge for April is to write an argument poem. Your poem may follow Marr’s pattern, and be about the pointlessness of arguing with an animal, bird, mountain, or whatever. Or maybe you would prefer writing about are argument with your parent, child, spouse, boss, or other person. Or maybe, like some of the Hebrew prophets, you want to argue with God. Be creative.

You may write a formal poem or free verse. If formal, please specify the form. The deadline is April 15. Poems submitted after the April 15 deadline will not be considered.

Copyright on poems is retained by their authors.

Due to formatting restrictions on the blog, all poems should be left justified. As much as I would enjoy a sparrow-shaped poem, I am unable to publish indentations, shaped poems or even extra spaces between words or phrases.

Poems published in books or on the Internet (including Facebook and other on-line social networks) are not eligible. If your poem has been published in a periodical, you may submit it if you retain copyright, but please include publication data.

How to Submit Your Poem

Send your poem to wildamorris[at]ameritech[dot]net (substitute the @ sign for “at” and a . for [dot]. Be sure provide your e-mail address. Submission of a poem gives permission for the poem to be posted on the blog if it is a winner, so be sure that you put your name, exactly as you would like it to appear if you do win, at the end of the poem.

© 2012 Wilda Morris